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I am her reflection.

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Yet she is not mine.

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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Impressive! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/> I see that this is your Deviant ID! I also jumped to your profile! Well I am going to judge this... without even knowing your ID, without even using what I know from your profile and I am going to judge this as if this is just a random picture I saw from searching! I won't even assume anything!

I know you wanted to emphasize the face (which worked really well) but I would love to see the body more. Maybe a couple of more black ink colors on the shoulders would do. She seems to be looking very sad and I love that your sketch lines are blue to represent the sadness she has. She looks like she is coming to life as something... incomplete since she is only a sketch! Anyway You deserve a favorite!

I was just searching through the critiqueable search and it was going on and on and on.... <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let…" width="15" height="15" alt=":P" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="395" title=":P (Lick)"/> but then I saw this one and I am so glad I didnt click next!